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Self Doubt

It lies in my head like a dead fish,
rotting, getting worse and worse.
Like a lump or bump, something I wont miss.
Like a old used tissue in a purse.

It sits in my mouth like a bad taste,
with stink it passes unto others.
It stays where it is like a paste.
It infects all my brothers,
I must get rid of such a thing with haste!

It will pass like any rain,
like any other bad day.
No thought shall ever cause me bane,
for with self doubt is not my way.
©2008-2009 ~StraightJacketRed
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This was literally something i came up within five minutes... its short and not much but i put it here. i was feeling self doubt and then i heard Pretender by Foo Fighters on the radio, and i wrote this. hope its not too bad, XD

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:iconcaptainquirk:
Hmm... Good point. I never thought about doubt's infectious nature.

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:star:Rules are like paperclips: meant to keep things together, fun to bend, and easily twisted out of shape.
:star:There is no problem the human mind cannot solve or create.
:star:Step One is learning the ropes. Step Two is chewing through them.
:iconstraightjacketred:
ah yes, i have doubts about a lot of things, i even had doubt about that poem, kinda ironic!

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Down with Ignorance and Stupidity! Knowledge for all!!! :shakefist: and cheese, lots of cheese... :cheese:
I know I'm insane, but its not like that's a bad thing...

:cheese: :cheese: :cheese: LONG LIVE ZE CHEESE!!! :cheese: :cheese: :cheese:
:iconstraightjacketred:
ha ha... i had doubts about that poem! lol kinda ironic!

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Down with Ignorance and Stupidity! Knowledge for all!!! :shakefist: and cheese, lots of cheese... :cheese:
I know I'm insane, but its not like that's a bad thing...

:cheese: :cheese: :cheese: LONG LIVE ZE CHEESE!!! :cheese: :cheese: :cheese:
:iconxxrisen-demonxx:
i have self doubt lol

what does bane mean??

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xXdon't hateXx
:iconstraightjacketred:
bane >noun a cause of great distress or annoyance.

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Down with Ignorance and Stupidity! Knowledge for all!!! :shakefist: and cheese, lots of cheese... :cheese:

Madness, it comes free with my gallery! 8D [link] D<
:iconxxrisen-demonxx:
ah okay.
i'm going to have to use that now

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xXdon't hateXx
:icondahnza:
Self doubt is the worst

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~Everything so pure has slowly faded to a lesser shade of gray...~
:iconstraightjacketred:
:(

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Down with Ignorance and Stupidity! Knowledge for all!!! :shakefist: and cheese, lots of cheese... :cheese:

Madness, it comes free with my gallery! 8D [link] D<

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